Comments on: Mencari Permata Yang Hilang

By: danisyah

danisyah — Wed, 01 Feb 2012 05:14:35 +0000

alah bestla cite ni..sambungla lagi,nak ikuti perkembangannya

By: Ahmad Khairul Ikhwan Abdullah Jr

Ahmad Khairul Ikhwan Abdullah Jr — Sat, 21 May 2011 09:19:58 +0000

Boleh tahan. cuma banyakkan dialog. pembaca boleh bosan kalau dialog x byk..

jagn marah..

By: azizan4444

azizan4444 — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 10:48:39 +0000

@akuzaty, mekasih2..heheh..idea lom sampai lg tu..xley nk smbg2..hehehehe

lg suke klu ad org nk smbg2 cerita ni..hehe…try la..kot2 lg mnrik.nnti klu buat gtaw la.ngee

By: akuzaty

akuzaty — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 10:24:28 +0000

waa~
ngn cre pnulisan mcmtu,
bkn takat cerpen je,
novel pown dah layak dah nie..
hee~
habiskn la cerita nie..
xsbr nk bce..=p
erm,kalo sy ade idea,
sy smbung ngn crte krangn sy okie..
hee~

By: azizan4444

azizan4444 — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 10:11:42 +0000

@oh!dawie, xde la pndai sgt bro..time bosan2 ley la buat cerpen tu..hehehe/

By: oh!dawie

oh!dawie — Mon, 21 Dec 2009 02:26:18 +0000

tgh siapkan ek?orait….aku lg xsbr nk bace cerpen dr org yg pandai mengarang nie..hoho

By: azizan4444

azizan4444 — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 08:34:53 +0000

@ahfatt, mmg mls bro.hahaha..nnti r aku sambung..kah3

By: azizan4444

azizan4444 — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 08:30:59 +0000

@oh!dawie, bkn xnk join bro…da buat tp lom siap lg..abes 30 hb kn?sempat lg kot aku siapkn..hehehe…mekasih bro..ngeee

By: oh!dawie

oh!dawie — Sun, 20 Dec 2009 08:02:16 +0000

hoho…ader bakat mengarang cerpen rupenye bro kite nie..awat xjoin contest yg aku wt bro?mane tau leh mng ke?aku tgk ayat2 ko agak best la..

By: ahfatt

ahfatt — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 00:58:13 +0000

sambunglah wei
pemalas le ko
haha